We are a Year 7/8 class at St Bernadette's School. This is a place where we will be able to share our learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just our first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. We would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday 19 October 2017
Taonga
For reading we were learning about Taonga (Maori Treasures), here is a slideshow by Siobhan.
hi Room 6, I like how you have learnt about the information and then made a DLO about it that's very cool. something you guys could work on is putting down more information about like different people playing the taonga
Hi Room 6, I like how you have explained about the values of the land and the values of the ocean its really interesting To find out what you got up to last year! maybe next time you could add more facts about Taonga and include some more information. other than that Keep up the great effort Room 6!
hi room 6, I like how you explained about all of the values of the sea and the land we live on maybe next time you could add in some more facts and maybe some of your own images too but grate job
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Hi.This slide show makes me want to go to tonga in real life.Keep this awesome work up-Izrael
ReplyDeleteHi Izrael,
DeleteThis slideshow isn't related to Tonga in anyway, please be sure to view the student's work properly before commenting. Thank you.
hi Room 6,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have learnt about the information and then made a DLO about it that's very cool. something you guys could work on is putting down more information about like different people playing the taonga
Hi Room 6,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have explained about the values of the land and the values of the ocean its really interesting To find out what you got up to last year! maybe next time you could add more facts about Taonga
and include some more information. other than that Keep up the great effort Room 6!
hi room 6,
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained about all of the values of the sea and the land we live on maybe next time you could add in some more facts and maybe some of your own images too but grate job